Hey Kat - Copywriting can definitely always be improved.

I come from new caledonia in the south pacific and i am a student in a business school, for the newt year i would like to open a restaurant in new caledonia

Hi all, I have a consulting and recruitment business working specifically with oral health professionals.

Hi I run a strategic planning and governance consultancy business for social enterprises

Good Morning Wellness Coach . What to impact People to embrace Wellness

Greetings from FL! I’m a digital marketing freelancer looking to level up my social media marketing skills.

Hello beautiful people,Sava Politis – Personal Development & Relationship CoachLove to connect:https://www.linkedin.com/in/sava-politis-13830431

Learning more about writing copy, any tips and tricks to bring people on a journey with me, you are right words are so powerful

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Will do - committing to at least one thing

Doing 1 thing from the session seems easy :)

connection

make it fun

spelling

Im the wrong viewpoint for this brand

feel uncomfortable selling myself

a question

Making it relate to my product

how can I make this interesting

Share the journey

attention grabing from the first few words

making the message connect with people

Second one

I like the second version especially when aiming to stand out

Number 1 is stiff, Number 2 is much more relatable and feels real

The second one.....more authentic/real/honest

2nd One - more playful

Perhaps to be a bit more playful

drop the jargon and corporate speak.

All of it... writing they way I would speak to someone.

remember you are the specialist dumb it down for people

Think Scribbling!

tip 3 - focus on benefit to them

More action oriented and less concerned with the grammar. Also, answer the 'So What? question.

Congratulations Neha

As already said, drop the jargon

Tip 2

can you pop the link in the chat please

Thank you Neha, lots of great insights

can you put that last slide up again with your contact details

I loved 'so'. That's gold!! I also love 'don't write, talk'. So true.Thanks!!. Sorry I came in late. I'm so glad I made it for your three points.

That’s awesome very insightful, thank you Neha

Thank you Neha and thank you Wendy. Very interesting and helpful session.

Thanks Neha!

Thanks Wendy!

Very nice presentation. Don't make reader think too much.

Thanks so much Wendy and Neha for arranging the session.. Just in time for me when I am on writing content for our startup idea's soft launch 🙏

Thank you Neha & Wendy. Great presentation & lessons. What's your view on #hashtags?

Just seconds before this meeting, I was working on my website, describing products and I was really struggling!! This has helped amazingly!

Then you begin to speak to your market - I really enjoy the reminder to consider how you would talk to your market if they already love you - rather than scrutinizing

What's your view on #hashtags?

Yes I'd like to know more about hashtags too

struggle with topics to talk about

how do you sound 'authentic' if your audience is vastly different to who you actually are? for instance I'm writing to young men, and I'm a not so young woman.

i struggle with telling my story about business and connecting with the audience or the person in front of me

Sharing vulnerable storytelling...how to make it feel safe for your customer to deal with your business so they don't think that you are a mental case with mental health issues! 🤓

I was struggling to describe them without writing an essay size! Now I realise you just have to put what they want/need to hear

Thank you!

Can you put the next slide up please

veery good points

Any final questions? Thanks

Off to write an article now - great timing, maybe I'll write about authenticity

Thanks Wendy and Neha, great session

can we get a recording of this later?

Yes it helped ! Thank you both, Wendy and Neha - Enjoy your days :)

Thank you so much for these insights.

how do we join this group?

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Fantastic!! Very helpful!! Thank you Ellax

yes

Thank you again.

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how to deal with family that doesn't believe in you

like they say you will never make a business with your ideas or you always fail so you will fail again

Also the elevator pitch sometimes we just ramble but we want to clearly communicate what we can do and it is difficult in front of a potential customer

Thankyou so much.

I love that! Just Ignore them! Family and friends can def be your biggest NON supporters at times. Massive thing is to remind oursekves that they are Not often our target market. So forget their criticism!

tHANKYOU

Thank you 🌺

THANKS WENDY!!! THANKS NEHA!

Thanks everyone, see you at something soon :)

Thanks for arranging this Wendy 🙏

😍

Thanks Neha and wendy